firsts jacknife+first sidewipe (?)

[Shinobi]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eo32BRWoKUY

well its still my firsts-so in my next footage i think they will be better.

but anyway- some tips will help me :)

[daviddalo]

not trying to be an asshole

but you look like you didnt learn any prerequisite at all :eh:

no height at all and really sloppy kicks, improve that first and then go for a 540 and cheat720 before killing yourself like that

[Shinobi]

here is the prerequisite:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eUVmVQ7BW8M

it isn't good enough?

[daviddalo]

not if you want those moves to be clean and good looking

pratice the cheat720 like you were throwing a knee when you pump, then work on kicking it with a roundkick, most important look at your target when you kick the hook

your sideswipe attempt looks like your 540 just with less height :eh:

[AjStyles]

cheat 720 is too early,
you are kicking without looking at the target.
Work on the C7.

[Rakamarasu]

Kick up not out

[Shinobi]

cheat 720 is too early,
you are kicking without looking at the target.
Work on the C7.

it looks early becuse its a hook kick.i can see the target when im kicking and i can hit the target.

[AjStyles]

it looks early becuse its a hook kick.i can see the target when im kicking and i can hit the target.

lol you are looking backwards when you throw the hook kick.

[Tossman]

I have to agree with AJ, your c7 is too short. The kick is awkward despite you hitting your target. For a JK you actually need an extra 180 degrees on that.

540 too low and heavy as well.

[uFail]

Sideswipe looks like a shit 540 without even jumping (I wonder why is that?) and it looks like your jackknife's a shit c720 with a ''kick'' before it.

EDIT: Train your 540s and c720s , alot.

[Shaolin.dk]

Just do more kicks basically and drill them ALOT!:wink:

[TKD_Andy]

get a MUCH better 540 and 540hook.

[Inkrepid]

Your pre-reqs arent near good enough yet, and arguing about that FACT will not change it.

[Konnar]

You are very tall for a 14 year old.

[Tactic]

You are very tall for a 14 year old.

yes he is haha

[wi boo]

Well, those attempts arent terrible, they aren't great either.
Prerequisites, i guess im starting to sound like a broken record, but it really is important.

Hows your tornado?
Hows your skip hooks?
Hows your narabongs/autobahns?
Hows your raiz?
Hows your gumbi?

get those moves really good and then just move on up to the bigger moves. im always drilling my basics, and making gains all the time.

good job anyway and good luck

[Ewasiuk]

Where the hell is skilzat when you need him?

[MmmPizza]

try throwing your right knee up harder on both c7 and 540
that shuld give you a bit extra hieght

[OyajiTricker]

ok, I will try to give you some cardinal advice. these guys are right, i don't agree with the avenue of approach, but o well. listen ****** go back to TORNADO kick. It might sound a little condescending but its not. work on going up then across. If you don't work on technique, when you advance , 9 times out of ten it will look sloppy. If you need any help just pm or hit me up on here. peace and GOD bless